Thursday, November 12, 2009

Argument Paper Invention Work

Audience:
My audience probably won't have much info on this topic because it's usually something that just happens and families just accept rather than research about before it happens. I talked about their values already, but their assumptions might just be that this is what a good parents would do for their child. I think they need to know some ideas of how to make it possibly work if they choose to let their kids stay or come home, but even better, help them be independent out on their own, and that they aren't bad parents for encouraging kids to do that.

Purpose:
What I want my audience to begin with is just that this is an issue that is happening but that it is just what you do because you are family. What I want them to see at the end of my paper is that if they are going to let their children live with them, there are a lot of things to lay out and talk about so that everyone is on the same page and so that the kids are still learning a lot of lessons that they need. However, the main point that I want them to see is that setting ground rules and everyone keeping them is ideal but rare so the best and most healthy thing for everyone is to create a space away from each other where everyone can grow like that stage in their life should allow.

Essay:
The main ideas or subtopics I will be incorporating are adultolescence is 1-keeping kids from learning characterisitics for a contributing citizen like responsibility, hard work, and independence. 2-It hinders parents from being able to work on creating a quality retirement financially and stable spousal relationship, and 3- it strains parent/child relationships by changing the definition of a parent into the adult child's landlord or housemaid.

I can argue that my position is valid because of the lack of maturity in adult kids now days, and my solution is going to give great results for kids becoming adults. I think the bad that will be avoided is strained relationships, a generation that is unprepared and unfit to be future leaders, and a retirement community who will not be as drained financially.

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